Some good comments. To improve your marks further try the following: * make sure you check your spelling as this will contribute towards your marks. * Also, try and go into more detail about what effect each element will have on an audience. Eg instead of just saying your slogan suggests the Macbook is better than previous Macbooks, you could add that this would encourage the audience to purchase this product even if they already have an existing macbook. * Also try and use more media words such as "signifies" instead of shows, means or says. * Also it might be worth adding in, when you mention colour, that black and silver signify technology and futuristic things. This might signify to the audience that your product is high tech and new?
Some good comments. To improve your marks further try the following:
ReplyDelete* make sure you check your spelling as this will contribute towards your marks.
* Also, try and go into more detail about what effect each element will have on an audience. Eg instead of just saying your slogan suggests the Macbook is better than previous Macbooks, you could add that this would encourage the audience to purchase this product even if they already have an existing macbook.
* Also try and use more media words such as "signifies" instead of shows, means or says.
* Also it might be worth adding in, when you mention colour, that black and silver signify technology and futuristic things. This might signify to the audience that your product is high tech and new?
ANALYSIS = C